It looks like a good starting
point! I would defenitly change some things though.
The descriptions of what you did for the jobs isn't exactly necesary, the postion title should take care of that. Like someone said earlier, its challenging to find the next job. Also your date format's vary.
I struggled with getting my resume to look as good as possible and I think I've finally figured out the key. Making the resume as clearly divided as possible and as easy to follow as possible is of the upmost importance. For me, the way to do that is having each production on one
line in the resume. I'll attach mine so you can check out an example.
If you'd like more examples I'd strongly reccomend looking through the Member Showcase
page on the United
Scenic Artist website in the
category you're in. If you click on one of the names they'll occasionaly post a link to their website in their
profile, which will almost always have a resume.
Here is the link to the Sound Designer's section of the showcase.
Mine's attached in PDF format. If you'd like the word format to mess around with, I'm willing to
send it to you, just shoot me a PM.
Hope this helps!!