I'm not a lawyer by any stretch of the imagination, but I do have some experience writing for formal government procedures, so I'll give it a shot. I agree with all of
Brad's points, and I'll add a few of my own.
Biggest issue is that you don't follow through with the rest of a payment schedule. You will receive 25% at contract signing, but what about the other 75%? Does that get paid on the day of the event? Within x business days following the event? Will you refuse to do the actual event until payment is rendered in full, or does payment happen at the end of the event? Is there a further breakdown of payment, like an additional 25% ten business days before the event, or is the rest all paid as one sum? You do say "at the end of services rendered," but you need to specify further. Do you expect your client to physically
hand you a check as soon as the event ends? What if they need to
send it through another department and it needs to be mailed to you? Also, if you're presenting them a "final billable invoice" at the end of services rendered, there's a good possibility they would have to
send this to a purchasing department, who can then authorize the payment, who can then get it to you.
This is more of an aesthetic note, but I had a hard time reading the contract in its PDF form. Perhaps you could change the background
image a
bit, or at least darken the text to make it more readable. I'm not sure if there's any legal recourse to the
effect of readability of contracts, but it'd just be a nice thing overall. Also, you should probably include all your company info (
address, fax, full name,
etc.) in the
header of the contract.
Consistency. Sometimes it's "Edrick Smith Productions" and other times it's "Edrick Smith Productions LLC". It sounds stupid, but that can be the loophole that screws you over. Also, the last sentence of the first paragraph should probably read "...must immediately contact Edrick Smith Productions LLC" or "the offices of Edrick Smith LLC", as opposed to "our offices". The legal writing which I have experience in was very anti-pronoun, but I don't know how applicable that is in this case.
What is your idea of an "emergency causing cancellation of the event"? Is this strictly limited to acts of god, or will "emergencies" such as the death of the promoter's dog also warrant a refund? I realize you specify that every situation is up for individual review, but being very
clear about what does and does not constitute a refundable emergency will only help you. Regardless of legal recourse, you don't want an angry client telling people that you denied them a refund for their emergency.
"Please note that this quote is only a bare minimum of services rendered." - I don't know what this is saying that isn't already said elsewhere. I think you're trying to say "This quote includes only the services that I told you we would provide, which are outlined on the attached quote, and if you want to add more than that, you can expect a higher price," but this isn't how it reads. I'd say, either remove the sentence or reword it slightly to say something different.
SAFETY! You need a clause that allows you to cancel or postpone the gig in the event of unsafe or unsanitary conditions. This could/should also apply to damage to equipment. As written right now, if a gig has the potential to put the lives of you or your employees in danger, you have effectively no legal grounds to refuse the gig. This is definitely an area where you'll want to consult an attorney.
(Disclaimer: I am not, have never been, and will never be an attorney, nor have I ever played one on TV, and while I did in fact stay at a Holiday Inn Express last night, that does not in any way qualify me to offer legal advice. Please consult an Bar-certified attorney to look over the contract before putting it into practical use.)