Looking at your rider I have a few notes:
-I don't understand the note about "largest obstruction"
-You contradict yourself by saying a loading dock is needed, and then saying its really not. I think if you say you are bringing a semi it can be assumed you need to load and unload it.
-What is the difference between load in and setup? Likewise with strike and load out? They should be one item and you are going to need waaay more than just 4 hands.... I would ask for at least 8, and just assume at most places you might not get what you want.
-It should be "Light Focus" and not "Focusing" on your schedule
-For your lineset schedule add in distance from the proscenium so you get things hung where you really want.
-Under Electric Requirements, you may want to add in a note about the promoter being responsible for tie in permits and what not.
-Also the note about console placement seems kinda pointless
-You spelled console wrong about 20 times....
-Under merchandise, you aren't carrying your own cash box or cash register? Really? You also want someone to run the booth and the the venue to pay the sales tax? Does the venue get a cut of this, your rider does not specify...
-I don't understand the note about "largest obstruction"
-You contradict yourself by saying a loading dock is needed, and then saying its really not. I think if you say you are bringing a semi it can be assumed you need to load and unload it.
-What is the difference between load in and setup? Likewise with strike and load out? They should be one item and you are going to need waaay more than just 4 hands.... I would ask for at least 8, and just assume at most places you might not get what you want.
-It should be "Light Focus" and not "Focusing" on your schedule
-For your lineset schedule add in distance from the proscenium so you get things hung where you really want.
-Under Electric Requirements, you may want to add in a note about the promoter being responsible for tie in permits and what not.
-Also the note about console placement seems kinda pointless
-You spelled console wrong about 20 times....
-Under merchandise, you aren't carrying your own cash box or cash register? Really? You also want someone to run the booth and the the venue to pay the sales tax? Does the venue get a cut of this, your rider does not specify...