What is this portfolio for? Are you looking at interviews for a company... grad schools... corporate... just to have? I gave up on the paper portfolio 3-4 years ago. Instead, I do quick printouts on a show by show basis that I
build in photoshop and print at Kinkos. It works pretty well. Plus, I can leave them with the place I am interviewing and my portfolio is always up to date. Besides that, my website is what has gotten me most of the jobs I have gotten in the last 4 years. Might be something to think about before you
drop a hundred bucks on something that is going to be outdated in 6 months and you can't edit like a traditional portfolio.
In my view the traditional portfolio is dead unless you are in academia. Its too hard to update them, too hard to travel with, and there are much better ways to do it now.
So, with that, I think your pictures look good artistically. However, they are not what the audience saw. They are what the photographer saw while standing onstage. Some of them are from the audiences perspective, but not all are. Captioning might also not be a bad idea. Also, the pictures could either take up more space or have more on one
page. I kind of like having an entire show
in one "view" on the
page. That way, it acts as a prop while I am talking and it leads to conversation. Otherwise, you just end up flipping pages over and over again.
Otherwise though, it looks good.