First off - I am assuming that the purpose of this site is to let prospective employers see the kind of work you do so they will be more likely to want to use you. If that is not what it is about, the rest of this post is probably off target ( I will be critiquing in the
role of a
producer interested in your work )
First of all, put some more work in your
intro photo to your designs. The shot for Edmond ( man and woman - long shot) does not display well. It is not in focus, and it appears to need some
color correction. Indeed a lot of your full
stage shots seem to be soft focus, and blown out a
bit in the highlights. Not good.
What Footer said about seeing a larger version. You are using very large images on the site. Either let me see them, or make them smaller so I don't take up so much bandwidth to see them. IE a 1.5MB
image is overkill for the size you are letting me see it at.
The images and resume might be ok - but where are the supporting documents. Give me a warm and fuzzy feeling that you know how to do paperwork. Take one show and give me a beautiful
light plot,
instrument schedule,
cue sheets,
magic sheet, design process shots,
etc. Make me comfortable that you can communicate with my electricians and get the work done in a quick and professional manner. I would opine that this is the biggest deficiency in your site at this time. Anybody can have pretty pictures - can you create a
plot, communicate with the director,
etc?
Find me some images that use gobos either on bodies, or on the scenery as scenic elements. I saw one
image with shadows that was probably a
gobo. Do you know how to use them - I can't tell.
I think you need to edit the number if images. Think carefully about what story you are trying to tell with your site, just as you think about what story you are trying to tell with your lighting design. Give me a link for 'more productions' somewhere, but put your best story out front. I will have about two minutes to look at your site and see if you merit further review. You have made it difficult to do this because you have not edited effectively - so I will probably think ' Eh - just another college student showing all he has ever done'.
In your 'Lighting Design' section you present a bunch of shows that I am not familiar with. I want context. Let me know what kind of show this is, and what kind of
venue it is so I can decide if I want to see more about it. IE "
'Anything goes' Musical. Small Proscenium. 250 dimmers. 312 fixtures. " This lets me see if you can handle my kind of space.
Hope this helps.